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        ~msbee

        3 years, 3 weeks ago

         

        (n_n)/

        not at all. And yes, this is definitely good direction. She has her trunk and I must admit that I like that background color better. Please consider things I mentioned: the typefaces (try how it will look like if you select something little lighter), fontsize and leading&tracking (should be smaller in my opinion). Also still bothers me that these heads have thicker outline than the girl...

        don't be discouraged, I'm sure it will be only better! take care, ~bee

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        ~msbee

        3 years, 4 weeks ago

         

        Hello once again, thank you for sharing the scan ^_^ If you look at it once again you notice there is relatively large white area which separates the figure from the background. Therefore, in this context, lack of some parts of girl's body is explainable. And also that is why it doesn't look like she falls into the depths of the background (; By the way, please pay attention to the letters on the original scan. As you can see only one type of typeface (something similar to the serif) has been used. And above all, letters are rather slim and light.

        Well, I don't know what you should do... I just gave you some advice, nevertheless it is your wall and your decision. But if you also think that the wallpaper should be improved don't even hesitate. Just do it. And I'll be grateful if you drop me a link after you finish your work. .(n_n). Take care, ~bee

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        ~msbee

        3 years, 4 weeks ago

         

        yeah.. well. I'm grouchy nasty bug, I know x_x' but yes, sure, I'll try to help you a little ^__^

        take care, ~bee

        [small]Hungarian, nicey![/small]

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        ~msbee

        3 years, 1 month ago

         

        (n_n)/

        oh, I suppose that you are a bit worried but really unnecessarily. Belive me, I did not have an intention to distress you. I just meant that your wall should be in SZero since I found there so many things that need to be improved. Making good wall requires days, weeks even months of hard work...

        :=[

        take care, ~bee

        [small]*by the way may I ask you what is your native language?[/small]

        //edit: I thought that your wall was in session zero lately, but I suddenly found it in gallery section ^__^ well then...